Static Fear - script available for perusal

**Mods** · January 17th, 2002, 06:14 PM

I'm sure none of you give a damn, but here's the script to the film we're making. I finished it tonight. Trust me, hardest 10 days of my life getting that thing done, hehe!

Please note:
- It is not in conventional movie script style, i lay mine out differently, more like a play. This is because it helps me as a director to work on dialogue more, and actions and things. I just get confused by the normal style frown

hehe

- Secondly, all that you read will somehow be done. Okay? biggrin

All comments would be appreciated.

We already have the PM's speech in the can, and we're shooting scene 1 on Saturday @ Oxford station. Fun eh!

Anyhow, enjoy. Feedback. Then send me money, cigarettes, and 17 year old bisexual blondes pls smile

== HERE IT IS! ==
http://screen7.adventuredeveloper.com/SFnew.doc
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Mods

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Mark "Mods" Lovegrove

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**Vlad the Impaler** · January 17th, 2002, 06:41 PM

hey, i'm reading this at the moment it is looking really cool! but what about the shots of the earth and the asteroid? wot u gonna do for that without it looking really fake?

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One Ring to rule them all

**Mods** · January 17th, 2002, 06:52 PM

Use real footage of the Earth from space, and use computer graphics for the asteroid. There's plenty of Earth footage on the internet, and i've got plenty of computer resources to make fairly good asteroids biggrin

It's just the rendering that will take the time

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Mods

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Mark "Mods" Lovegrove

**Vlad the Impaler** · January 17th, 2002, 06:57 PM

some other stuff...
it's looking great so far, I've read up to page 10.
1 thing that stuck me was the computer screen message "ROTATION SLOWING" i think u should give that a more technical name.
And also in some places theres a touch too much dialogue that I felt wasn't really needed

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One Ring to rule them all

**Mods** · January 17th, 2002, 09:19 PM

Thanks man.

There is some irrelevant conversation in there for length, and Pulp Fiction stylee, but if you think its totally irellevant please let me know which bits.

Thanks for reading it, glad your enjoying/enjoyed it smile

Mods

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Mark "Mods" Lovegrove

**Davis** · January 24th, 2002, 04:10 AM

I'll send you money, and I'll send you 17 year old blonde bisexuals, but I will not contribute to your smoking habit. Bad bad bad for you.

Also, I'm hoping this was an oversight, but you forgot the word "females," as in "17 year old bisexual blonde females." Or WAS IT an oversight!?

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"He who breaks a thing to discover what it is has left the path of wisdom."
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eddie · January 24th, 2002, 10:58 AM

All I have to say is you posted the ending up on the internet. So I dont want to watch it now.
Leave the ending a mystery! Dont make it publicly available.

Other than that it looks great, a real B movie. Even if the dialog all seems to be American.

Good Luck!

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**Mods** · January 24th, 2002, 02:27 PM

Hehehe, Davis, I'll check that line. Might have been an oversight. SF was written in quite a rush in the end :O

eddie, sorry for ruining the ending for you, hehehe. Still, now you've read it, surely u'd be intruiged to see how we pull the ending off, eh?

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